Thursday, March 5, 2020
Peer editing blog
Today we started peer editing. The group we did had 2 people. We got the sheet to write on and started. We put in the flash drive and went to the file they said to go to. The movie started off pretty good. They had someone writing a note on a desk. They also had the lamp on to make dim lighting and it looked pretty good. Then I think it was a flashback and it showed two people arguing on some bleachers. It then showed one of the people walking away and cut back to the person writing the letter. It was pretty good so far. The movie showed the person putting the paper into the envelope and taping it together. It cut to someone opening the door. They hugged and instantly left. They came back with some pizza and the film started to get a little worse. They opened the pizza box and one of the girls grabbed it. She was about to eat it and just held the pizza there without eating it. At this point me and my group members were confused and had no idea what the plot was. we assumed it was some sort of killer but didn't really know. then the envelope came and they looked at it but never opened it. Then that was it. I still had no clue what was going on and was very confused. We helped them out on the peer review sheet and then class ended.
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